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sasami_kikyo_rox
Take a glance. Notice me. I hold pain you'll never see. From all the times I cried at night, From all the times I had no light. Out of question, Out of sight, Out of air, Out of time. Fake smiles, broken dreams, take the time to notice me. No act, No voice, No exceptions, No choice. Take a glance. Notice me. For all the things I cannot be. What is good, now is gone, What felt right, feels so wrong.
Take a look, can it be?
Who I once was, can never be?

Notice Me...





(Thank You)
Elmo
Beautiful.
I think one of my friends would love to read this.
She's been through a hard time and feels kind of like how this poem describes.
sasami_kikyo_rox
QUOTE (Rave_Babe @ May 14 2008, 06:23 PM) *
Beautiful.
I think one of my friends would love to read this.
She's been through a hard time and feels kind of like how this poem describes.



Thank you! ^^

anyway, i love your sig and av. i'm a bisexual too!!

off topic again!

feel free to show it to your friend! just give me credit, kay?
Elmo
QUOTE (sasami_kikyo_rox @ May 14 2008, 07:25 PM) *
Thank you! ^^

anyway, i love your sig and av. i'm a bisexual too!!

off topic again!

feel free to show it to your friend! just give me credit, kay?

Thank you!

And I will. Thanks for letting me show it to her. She'll feel so much better I just know it.
sasami_kikyo_rox
QUOTE (Rave_Babe @ May 14 2008, 06:29 PM) *
QUOTE (sasami_kikyo_rox @ May 14 2008, 07:25 PM) *
Thank you! ^^

anyway, i love your sig and av. i'm a bisexual too!!

off topic again!

feel free to show it to your friend! just give me credit, kay?

Thank you!

And I will. Thanks for letting me show it to her. She'll feel so much better I just know it.


I'm glad!! Tell me how she feels about it!
Hummingbird
Wow I really like it!! I can relate to it perfectly.
saDDerLA
Great poem! feelings are felt!
sasami_kikyo_rox
thank you!!
Alyssa
Very good poem smile.gif
Oddball
Great poem! I think you should make a song version beause I ended up singing it.
sasami_kikyo_rox
QUOTE (Detective Oddball @ May 17 2008, 03:38 AM) *
Great poem! I think you should make a song version beause I ended up singing it.


o rly? haha, thank you! i'll think about the beat!
i hope evanescence sings it if i get it published!
Oddball
QUOTE (sasami_kikyo_rox @ May 18 2008, 05:06 AM) *
QUOTE (Detective Oddball @ May 17 2008, 03:38 AM) *
Great poem! I think you should make a song version beause I ended up singing it.


o rly? haha, thank you! i'll think about the beat!
i hope evanescence sings it if i get it published!

They'd have to credit ya too so you can be famous!
Tiia
^ i agree with odd!!! i ended singing it too!!! ya kno, u shud make lyrics?? happy.gif
sasami_kikyo_rox
haha! thanks! i'll think about it!! ^^ but thanks for the support!!
Plutopia
Very nice poem.happy.gif
sasami_kikyo_rox
QUOTE (Plutopia @ May 20 2008, 03:08 AM) *
Very nice poem.happy.gif



Thank you!!
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