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Alyssa
Here is a poem I wrote, I might post more later. My poems are mostly about my feelings, I suck at poems but it kinda feels good to put my feelings on paper... >.<

All I need

All I need is someone who understands me,
someone who cares about me.
All I need is someone I can talk to, someone
I can tell about my feelings, about what happend this day.
All I need is someone who I can laugh with.
All I need is someone who can cheer me up when I have a
bad day.
All I need is a friend

Sounds stupid right...
Tiia
nah~~~ its fine, sish!!! ^^
the only advice i would ever give you is to put ur emotions on paper~~~
and have good marks for english test... xP
(im QUITE bad in it though... but i wonder why my teacher says im very expressive in writing.....)
Alyssa
Thanks Tiia

wow........ this topic gets allot of replies!
Tiia
lol.... you hafta wait... i ALWAYS have to do so, too... ^^

neways... post more!!!!!!
Elly
Aww, it's kinda sad but I still love it =D Good job Alyssa!
Alyssa
Thanks Elly ^^ yea it is lol
xox-Zanessa-xox
Aww happy.gif itz soo cute alyssa :] :]
^.^
itz a good poem xD
PikaChuiy~
It's very emotional and relate-able.
Alyssa
Thanks everyone for the comments
demifan1
Nice poem! MORE, MORE and MORE!
Alyssa
Thanks Emma, I do more later
Nika
Cool poem! Nice work, Alyssa!
Alyssa
Thanks Nika
Arya
QUOTE (Alyssa @ Oct 30 2008, 01:22 PM) *
Here is a poem I wrote, I might post more later. My poems are mostly about my feelings, I suck at poems but it kinda feels good to put my feelings on paper... >.<

All I need

All I need is someone who understands me,
someone who cares about me.
All I need is someone I can talk to, someone
I can tell about my feelings, about what happened this day.
All I need is someone who I can laugh with.
All I need is someone who can cheer me up when I have a
bad day.
All I need is a friend

Sounds stupid right...


No it doesn't! It sounds really sweet. Keep writing!
Ria
blink.gif How'd I never see this before? must be cuz I hardly view this section but OMG!! Alyssa hug.gif Didn't think you were the poetry type. Thats really good thumbsup.gif
Alyssa
Ermmm... thnx i dun see how it's good but anyways lol ;p hug.gif

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